Talk:Law

I've made some hasty changes to the second paragraph to get out the statements that were not true for U.S. law, but this article needs a lot of work. I suggest that everyone interested in working on it (including, of course, the original author, and thanks for such a good start -- I really like the international approach) touch base here to coordinate their efforts, either by working on separate sections at the same time or by taking turns at the whole thing. I'd like to see this article become the showpiece of the Law Workgroup, so when it gets to a place where my experience editing legal articles would help, let me know, and I'll go over it. -- k kay shearin 21:31, 22 February 2007 (CST)

This article, a typical Wikipedia article, attempts to sum up every major area of the law in one article, and as a result simply cannot succeed in providing a clear exposition of any of them. Why should an article about discipline X take the form of a list of definitions of all the subdisciplines of X? It shouldn't. See Biology for a different approach. The topic of the article is not "categories of law," but instead, law. Hence (I think) it should dwell quite a bit on the philosophical question, "What is law?" and introduce some of the problems and subdisciplines of law as part of an interesting narrative about the law. This is difficult, but it's only such an article that will actually satisfy a demand for an article with the title "law." The function of this article is not to act as a table of contents to the rest of law-related articles, but to introduce the topic named in the title, for people who presumably need an introduction. Imagine, for instance, trying to explain what law itself is to a college student who is considering studying the law. I don't have any specific suggestions as to how the article might be structured, but I do think that it lacks anything like an interesting, cohesive narrative that might make someone actually want to read it from beginning to end. --Larry Sanger 17:29, 23 February 2007 (CST)