Talk:Fire

Article Checklist for "Fire"

Workgroup category or categories	Science Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status	Stub: no more than a few sentences
Underlinked article?	No
Basic cleanup done?	No
Checklist last edited by	--Robert W King 12:42, 7 August 2007 (CDT)

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Work in progress

Wip. --Robert W King 12:42, 7 August 2007 (CDT)

Developmental/Evolutionary

"The harnessing of fire is said to have been a pivotal event in mankind's developmental history."

While I officially (in the context of this project) do not take a stance on either evolution or creation (I leave my personal politics out of here), I think that using "evolutionary" might imply a pro-evolution stance; but I could be mistaken.--Robert W King 07:47, 12 August 2007 (CDT)

Not hard to say what the better style is

Hayford: "difficult to determine" is no more exact than "hard to say." The latter is easier to read, more inviting, and in short perfectly acceptable for CZ. I'm opposed to making language sound formal for its own sake, or preferring Latin-based words, and that sort of thing. Like Strunk and White, I prefer punchy, Anglo-Saxon words, which are usually shorter, more colorful, and, since they are often less formal-sounding, also more appropriate for a readable introduction to a topic. Cf. CZ:Article Mechanics. (Can you tell that you touched a nerve there?  ;-) ) --Larry Sanger 11:03, 12 August 2007 (CDT)

I have to agree here. --Robert W King 11:06, 12 August 2007 (CDT)

P.S. "Fire is an observable side effect produced by an exothermal chemical reaction" is, with all due respect, a horrible first sentence for an article about fire. We should start by saying things that people looking to read about fire are most interested in knowing; the precise scientific definition (or, explanation), replete with jargon, is unnecessary at the start. What I want to know are: what sort of thing is the flame itself? How hot is fire? How bright is fire? (Or, of course, the question might be the variations. How hot and bright are the average fireplace or campfire fire? Or the stovetop flame?) Why is fire so fascinating? What are its main uses? We need a scientist who is a bit of a poet to introduce this topic. If we want to start with a scientific definition, then for god's sake explain the terms.  :-) The topic of the article is "fire," not "exothermal chemical reaction." --Larry Sanger 11:11, 12 August 2007 (CDT)

Image

The person responsible for this image says it's a bonfire lit to celebrate Guy Fawkes Night (5th November, when fireworks and bonfires celebrate Fawkes's failure to blow up Parliament). Robert W. King has reverted my addition of "this bonfire in Leeds, UK shows how fire is a fundamental part of human culture", returning the image description to the (slightly surreal) "Fire". John Stephenson 11:10, 12 August 2007 (CDT)