Talk:Great Siege of Scarborough Castle/Archive 1: Difference between revisions
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In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC) | In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC) | ||
:OK, I've made [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Great_Siege_of_Scarborough_Castle&diff=100581099&oldid=100580947 these edits]. These expand the background of what happened in 1643-1644, before the siege, and include dates. Please let me know about anything else that needs doing. Thanks. [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 04:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC) | |||
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Suggestions towards approval
In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. Russell D. Jones 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
- OK, I've made these edits. These expand the background of what happened in 1643-1644, before the siege, and include dates. Please let me know about anything else that needs doing. Thanks. John Stephenson 04:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC)