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In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC) | In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC) | ||
:OK, I've made [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Great_Siege_of_Scarborough_Castle&diff=100581099&oldid=100580947 these edits]. These expand the background of what happened in 1643-1644, before the siege, and include dates. Please let me know about anything else that needs doing. Thanks. [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 04:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC) | :OK, I've made [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=Great_Siege_of_Scarborough_Castle&diff=100581099&oldid=100580947 these edits]. These expand the background of what happened in 1643-1644, before the siege, and include dates. Please let me know about anything else that needs doing. Thanks. [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 04:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Siege aspects == | |||
"Great" siege implies there were others, but the existence of other sieges isn't obvious. | |||
I set up a redirect for [[cannonball]]. While we really need articles on siege warfare in general, it's probably worth mentioning that castles were essentially pre-gunpowder fortifications; cannon made them obsolete. | |||
Looks good, though. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 19:40, 3 October 2009 (UTC) | |||
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In the section "royalist stronghold," the first sentence concludes "next several months." The timing reference has been lost by the new section. Please include dates. Russell D. Jones 14:27, 27 September 2009 (UTC)
- OK, I've made these edits. These expand the background of what happened in 1643-1644, before the siege, and include dates. Please let me know about anything else that needs doing. Thanks. John Stephenson 04:07, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
Siege aspects
"Great" siege implies there were others, but the existence of other sieges isn't obvious.
I set up a redirect for cannonball. While we really need articles on siege warfare in general, it's probably worth mentioning that castles were essentially pre-gunpowder fortifications; cannon made them obsolete.
Looks good, though. Howard C. Berkowitz 19:40, 3 October 2009 (UTC)