Photosynthesis: Revision history

27 December 2009

• curprev 11:4911:49, 27 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,693 bytes +311‎ add point

26 December 2009

• curprev 19:3919:39, 26 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,606 bytes +224‎ No edit summary

24 December 2009

• curprev 19:4719:47, 24 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,382 bytes +208‎ →‎Overview: elaborating captions
• curprev 19:3919:39, 24 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,174 bytes +1,217‎ language and content development

9 December 2009

• curprev 23:3623:36, 9 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 10,846 bytes −1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 23:3223:32, 9 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,847 bytes +811‎ add ref
• curprev 23:2023:20, 9 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,661 bytes +333‎ working on lede

6 December 2009

• curprev 14:0514:05, 6 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,328 bytes +292‎ →‎Overview: Reduce image width from 500 px to 450px
• curprev 11:3911:39, 6 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,328 bytes +144‎ a few concept elaborations

3 December 2009

• curprev 22:4422:44, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,184 bytes +148‎ →‎Overview: a few points of clarification
• curprev 22:3022:30, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 10,159 bytes −3‎ No edit summary
• curprev 22:2922:29, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,162 bytes +126‎ Trying to clarify Chris's point
• curprev 22:1522:15, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,105 bytes +69‎ Minor rewrite 2nd pgraph Intro
• curprev 22:1122:11, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,092 bytes −17‎ should be careful not to give the impression that the CO2 and water linked in the same step.
• curprev 22:0022:00, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,109 bytes +73‎ add phrase
• curprev 21:5621:56, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 10,037 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 21:5421:54, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,036 bytes +79‎ Reworking the lede pgraph, adding a little more detail, and converting passive voice to active for more lively reading and eimination of weak verbs
• curprev 13:2713:27, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 9,730 bytes −227‎ the first paragraph needs to be gereal if this articles goal is to encompass all version of photsynthsesis. Chlorophyll is only one of the pigment that are used
• curprev 03:0303:03, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,958 bytes +1‎ Another nice image. Moved it to the right so text would not look so chopped up as it did with it on the left.
• curprev 02:5902:59, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,957 bytes 0‎ Nice image now. Reduced size a little bit and it is still quit legible.
• curprev 00:0000:00, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 9,957 bytes +9,957‎ →‎Overview: add additional illustration; need to edit text to coordinate

2 December 2009

• curprev 21:5121:51, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 9,801 bytes −1‎ →‎Overview: another redo of illustration
• curprev 20:2920:29, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,802 bytes −1,578‎ Lede: better begin with a definition and a brief explanation
• curprev 08:2008:20, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,030 bytes 0‎ →‎Overview
• curprev 08:1808:18, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,030 bytes +1‎ →‎Overview
• curprev 01:1101:11, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,029 bytes −1,351‎ →‎Overview: try to trim redundancy and improve flow
• curprev 00:4100:41, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,301 bytes −41‎ break up the initial long sentence

1 December 2009

• curprev 00:1400:14, 1 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,342 bytes 0‎ To be consistent with the other names
• curprev 00:0600:06, 1 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,342 bytes +134‎ No edit summary

30 November 2009

• curprev 23:0423:04, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,299 bytes 0‎ →‎Overview: another redo of illustration;
• curprev 19:0219:02, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,299 bytes +91‎ →‎Overview: redo image per suggestion by Milton

29 November 2009

• curprev 23:3623:36, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,296 bytes +88‎ →‎Overview: update image
• curprev 21:4621:46, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,296 bytes +88‎ →‎Overview: add image-simplified overview of photosynthesis
• curprev 19:3519:35, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,208 bytes −1,172‎ →‎Overview: Shortened this reference. See Talk page and discussion in "Article Policy" section of the forums.
• curprev 19:2719:27, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,569 bytes +189‎ Shortened reference 7. See Talk page and discussion of "Excessive annotations" in "Article Policy" section of forums.
• curprev 19:0619:06, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,784 bytes +404‎ Changed blockquote margins a bit to get entire quote on one line.

28 November 2009

• curprev 15:4415:44, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,785 bytes −231‎ Combined two identical references, by Vermass, into one multiple form citation.
• curprev 15:3515:35, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 12,016 bytes +425‎ elaborating slightly on lede paragraph for a more comprehensive, but concise, introduction of the topic
• curprev 14:4414:44, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,591 bytes +211‎ attribution ref for lede sentence

27 November 2009

• curprev 20:4220:42, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 11,380 bytes −2,448‎ Fixed a spelling error of mine
• curprev 18:1618:16, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,379 bytes −4‎ A final copy edit of references
• curprev 18:1418:14, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,378 bytes −5‎ A great many small copy edits to establish some consistency in naming authors and use of commas and italics. Using the {{cite book}} and {{cite article}} templates would provide consistency.
• curprev 16:2216:22, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,360 bytes −18‎ Minor copy edit to remove unneeded usage of ''' which served no purpose
• curprev 16:1716:17, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,378 bytes −16‎ Removed "(hbks)" and "(comp)" which do not convey any needed content
• curprev 16:1316:13, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,394 bytes +11‎ A few minor copy edits to remove bullets which are not required.
• curprev 16:0216:02, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,392 bytes +9‎ Replaced broken external link with one that works.
• curprev 12:4812:48, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,383 bytes −6‎ →‎Overview: Brackets around the word "Oxygen" are not really necessary.
• curprev 12:4412:44, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 11,385 bytes −4‎ Minor revision of block quote margins to get the quote to fit on one 1 line
• curprev 12:3612:36, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,383 bytes −6‎ Telling readers that the book is a paperback is not an essential piece of information.
• curprev 12:3312:33, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,389 bytes −2,439‎ "Preliminarily, the reader might refer to the following:" is an incomplete sentence. and is not required.